After I taught the
seashell lesson in my son's third grade class, his teacher told me she planned to have the students write haiku poems about their shells. Haiku is a challenging form of poetry to write and one that can be too hard for some children due to it's rigid 5-7-5 syllable structure. English Language Learners and children with language disabilities have an especially difficult time. I suggested a similar, yet easier to manage, relative of the haiku-the Lune- as an alternative. His teacher welcomed the suggestion.
A lune is a short poem of 11 words: 3 words in the first line, 5 words in the second line, and 3 words in the third line. Frequently, the third line offers a surprise. For more information about lunes, including examples, I recommend the book
Poetry Everywhere by Jack Collum and Sheryl Noethe. I have the first edition. Here's the second:
If you wish to explore other poetic forms with your children or students, this book is an excellent resource.
Here are some examples taken from my son's third grade class. Only students who wished to have their poems published are included. Not all of the poems stick to the 3-5-3 structure (some did 5-3-5) but they have a similar feel. All students drew their shells, as well, but I think these poems stand alone well.
My shell is
orange bumpy and smooth at
the same time.
by Kayla
My shell is very curly
round and short
and colors of the rainbow.
by Nathan
My shell looks
like a breaking wave crashing
onto the shore.
by Dante
A happy shell
swimming in the blue sea
on its back.
by Hannah
A conch is a conch
brown to its
point, dizzy, dizzy, dizzy you get!
by Haley
Happy scallops live in shells
sad scallops don't
Sad scallops get eaten. Yum!
by Ben
This oval shaped, spikey shell
has brown bumps
with a peach colored inside.
by Beatrice
My shell is at the
sunny beach with
all the shells and creatures.
by Cole F.
One black dot
in the middle, bumpy brown
around every edge.
by Cecilia
My shell has
wings on its side to
help it swim.
by Ella
My shell looks very bumpy
and also looks
like the beautiful setting sun.
by Marissa
My shell has two parts,
lives in the
ocean and opens and shuts.
by Julia
And here's one that is best read along with the art:
Will you give Lunes a try? Since they're such a short form, I hope you'll share examples in the comments.